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I'm writing my first ever poem and here I go... !! Rider of the Life - LUCK !! ..FEEDBACK ?
People whom we need very badly,
we get them very rarely.
People whom we are not at all needy,
it's hard to leave their company.
People whom we are very anxious to meet,
we cannot achieve it.
People whom we dislike from the bottom of our heart,
we have to approach them apart.
When we do not like to live our life,
time doesn't get over like strife.
At the beginning in life- things we think as a meaningless
are very deep and thick forest
and this, we realize at the end of our life.
When we realize the true meaning of our life
then time gets over and stabs us with knife.
and this is the name of LUCK only!
Whatever alertness we take or keep to be fit
no matter, you cannot ride it.
You have to follow it wherever it takes you.
P.S. : This crap is written by me so if you like it then please do comment on it because it feels nice when someone appreciates the crap you write. (laughs)! Thank you!! :)
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Comment by Nikhil Gala on December 28, 2009 at 13:15 -
ok ok ok
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Comment by Lax kenia on December 7, 2009 at 21:26 -
Never de value your work.
Its not crap
and u donot mean it.
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Comment by Nikhil Gala on December 7, 2009 at 17:34
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thank you Lax sir!
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Comment by Lax kenia on December 4, 2009 at 12:52
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I had given my poetry to pagdandi for publication.
It was sent to visan nagda for review.
He said first four stanza are poetry....other massage.So we decided to keep poetry and it was published in December 2009 issue.
MAY I SUGGEST TO SUBMIT AND GET IT OFFICIALLY REVIEWED....BY PAGDANDI.
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Comment by Nikhil Gala on December 4, 2009 at 12:09
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@Lopa Dharod (Maru)
Thanks a ton !! :)
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Comment by Lopa Dharod (Maru) on December 3, 2009 at 12:53 -
Hello Nikhil ! That's life. Very nicely u noted down in words. Best wishes to compose more.
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Comment by Nikhil Gala on November 28, 2009 at 19:51
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@bhavini
Either you wish or work very hard , without LUCK u can not achieve it and that what i've felt in my life.
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Comment by Bhavini Ramesh Dedhia on November 28, 2009 at 19:31 -
Hey Nikhil great work and very good writing...and hey truly agree that Luck is the player of all things in life but another thing that is true is we all keep our luck in our hands and most of it depends on our wishes goals and how hard we follow them.... if we truly work hard all is possible in life...
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